The Villa (WIP)

Author Note: Some time ago I was invited to participate in the development of an erotic novel. Due to life I haven't been able to give it a proper consideration until recently. Initially, I thought the scope of my participation would be advisory, however I have coaxed into becoming one of the main writers. So I am presenting a bit of a scene I am currently working on. This is a little bit out of my wheel house because I am coming from the female prospective. Please tell me if I got it right or even close...











He had no idea what he was doing to me. His dick was buried so deeply in my pussy. My arm pinned behind my back while he pumped ferociously. I loved it when the beast came out of him. I was lost in bewilderment of this loving and tender man who made love to him so passionately, now taking me like a wanton beast. My head pulled back, my mouth gaped open, and breast bouncing to every stroke. I knew it wouldn’t long before he would fill my waiting pussy with his cum. I knew this was just the beginning of our lovemaking. In my heart I knew this would go on for years to come. I loved this man with every fiber of my being and I had to make sure he knew it. The memory of his sweet, tangy cum filled my thoughts. I kept thinking how much I wanted all over my face and breasts. I cupped my breast with my free hand. My nipples are rock hard. His thrusts have become deeper and harder. It won’t be

long before he explodes. I have to make my move now.

I pull off his cock and sit at the edge of the bed. His cock is glistening from my juices. His balls are tight and he is harder than ever before. I look up into eyes, as I begin to stroke him. I lick away the pre-cum. He begins to groan loudly as I begin to nurse the head. I swirl my tongue around the tip as I continue to stroke him with both hands. His head is thrown back and he is gripping the foot board. I need him to cum. I lift up his cock and suck his sac while stroking him. He is groaning even louder. His groans send me into a frenzy. I take him into my mouth. It drives me crazy how he feels in my mouth. I begin sucking him with all that I am worth. I take him deeper until he hits the back of my throat. The sensation pushes me over the edge. An orgasm rips through my body, but I keep my lips firmly wrapped around his dick. I force his dick pass the gagging point and take all the way into my mouth. His aroma is intoxicating, as my nose is nestled in his groin.

His dick is swelling. He grips my head and began fucking my throat. My mouth is stretched to its limits and my jaws ache. He body stiffens and shakes. I release him from mouth and stroke him. My tongue is going crazy on his head. He unleashes a final groan and starts to cum. I began cumming immediately as the first splash hits my face. Splash after splash of warm cum coats my face and cheeks. His body begins to jerk as the final spurt lands on my tongue. I squeeze his sac trying to get the remaining cum, as I nurse the head. Max falls on to the bed spent and satisfied. I rub the dropping over my breasts and scoop the remnants into my mouth.