To look at him you would have never guessed it. Those
captivating eyes with a majestic gaze, tanned skin, and sculpted frame. He had
his pick no matter where he went. Over a dozen women fell prey to his charms
before he was discovered. There was an evil that lurked inside of him. Normally,
I would worry about him and his actions. Normally, I would chalk things up to
fate. Until he picked the wrong women. My sweet, sweet Marlie she never done
anything to anyone. Now, his soul better belong to Jesus, cause his ass belongs
to me.
I adore that last line!
ReplyDeleteOOhhh, love it. Revenge is going to be sweet, isn't it?
ReplyDeleteNicely done, Mangua! A revenge story is always a good one to write more about *hint* ;-)
ReplyDeletelol love the last bit Mangus. Great flash x
ReplyDeleteAwesome flash! I love how you twisted it so fast and made for a great cliff hanger. I want to know what happens next. Sounds like this guy better watch out for himself. :)
ReplyDeletereally gripped me, and the ending? Oh my
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